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The Real Story - P3, The Moon by Nimaru The Real Story - P3, The Moon by Nimaru
[Part 1] 1000 x 5400 pixels

[Part 2] 1000 x 8900 pixels

And now this, part3, coming in at 1000 x 14000 pixels! Good thing the story is almost over!

Some people seem to be stopping here and missing part four. Don't miss the conclusion!

EDIT: [Part 4]

BONUS: For HARDCORE mode, listen to this while you read the story: [link]

As huge as this is, as hard as it was, and as long as it took, there are several things I couldn't fit in. Some will be placed into a separate comic centered on the elements of harmony from 1000 years ago and the rest will take place in the epilogue of this comic (sorry everyone, but there's going to be a part 4).

Fortunately, the last few things I need to do for this comic won't take as long to finish and should wrap up things nicely.

By the way, I know this comic, being that it really starts getting creative with the events of the banishment might rub some people the wrong way. But I gave it my very best shot at making it plausible and fit with the official canon. As of now, everything here is a completely realisitic representation of what might have happened. I JUST BARELY beat the season 2 premiere with this and if it ends up contradicting my theories, well... I WAS FIRST so HA!

I also know there's some artwork out there for the parents, but I wanted to try my own ideas for the design (and mine are way easier to draw anyway :) )

Lastly, I wanted to say that the writing was harder here than in any other comic. There really is a lot shoved in, but I tried to only include the bare minimum that was necessary.

After all, it needed to be heard.

EDIT: I forgot, I'm calling her parents "Orbash" (her father) and "Tau Sunflare" (her mother). Can anyone guess why?

EDIT: by demand: The elements of harmony are (from left to right):
Winter Willow - Kindness, pegusus
Rose Petal - Generosity, Unicorn
Celestia - (all, but in this case, Magic), Alicorn
Rook - MALE, loyalty, pegasus.
Crabapple - MALE, Honesty, earth pony
Luau - Laughter, earth pony

I will be doing more stuff with them in the future :)
EDIT: I already did! Here's an 8 part comic with just them:
[link]

EDIT: This is getting silly. The last scene with Luna near the end is supposed to be an illusion to throw Celestia off. Some people seemed to think it was really her so.. I guess I didn't pull that off as well as I hoped.
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:iconlilbob2000:
Lilbob2000 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2017
Who were those ponies?
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey there. I'd be happy to answer, but which ones are you talking about? There's a few described in the description up there if you mean the other alicorns.
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:iconlilbob2000:
Lilbob2000 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2017
The ones next to Celestia.
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They are her parents :)

Or my early version of them. I've changed them since then.
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:iconlilbob2000:
Lilbob2000 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2017
Not her parents 
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:iconfeatherwind2060:
featherwind2060 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
W-wait, "in a different world, where dark feelings and pain are all too common, there are beings who know about equestria, and some look apon it with hate or perversion" N-Nightmare moon is our f-fault!OMG  Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Nuu Cry emote Cry emote Cry emote Cry emote Cry emote Cry a Puddle Cry a Puddle Cry a Puddle Cry a Puddle Cry a Puddle Really Sad Cry a Puddle Cry a Puddle Cry a Puddle Cry a Puddle    
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Dracorider19 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Well I guess that would represent the people who hate MLP and bronies, but I wouldn't say it's 'our' fault, just the people
who don't take time to understand what the MLP fandom is all about. 
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:iconfeatherwind2060:
featherwind2060 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah good point. still tho
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconfujin777:
Fujin777 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Good stuff.
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:icontigrospottystripes:
TigroSpottystripes Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
I believe it's spelled "miasma".
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:icongeekytaco:
geekytaco Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016
when a fan artist with a comic can make a better backstory for this than the actual writers on the show
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconrazzledazzle17:
RazzleDazzle17 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why does tias mum have baby horns on her horn, and also, WOWIE AMAZING JOB INSTANT FAV AND WATCH
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:iconlegacy-galaxy:
Legacy-Galaxy Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And her dad!
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It was a design choice that I decided against in the end. My newer drawings of her just have a crown of fire instead of smaller horns.
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:icontoonartist77:
ToonArtist77 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Wow ! Awesome.
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:icontoonartist77:
ToonArtist77 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Clap Huggle! 
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:iconanotherbrony:
AnotherBrony Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Why do the older alicorns have many horns?
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Eh... it was my idea at the time, but in the end I didn't like it :P

So I ended up drawing them differently now.
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:iconanotherbrony:
AnotherBrony Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
But why, tho?
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:iconcordeliasmorgenstern:
CordeliaSMorgenstern Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2016
"EDIT: I forgot, I'm calling her parents "Orbash" (her father) and "Tau Sunflare" (her mother). Can anyone guess why?"

Why?
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Orbash -> Hasbro
Tau Sunflare -> Lauren Faust.

Anagrams :D
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:iconcordeliasmorgenstern:
OH. MY. GOD. I am so in awe of you.
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconcordeliasmorgenstern:
Never be modest about this. Too. Freaking. Awesome.
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:iconmorrofnaf:
Morrofnaf Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016
I am a terrible drawer compared to every body!!!!
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You should check this out: www.youtube.com/watch?v=da0OMZ…
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:iconmorrofnaf:
Morrofnaf Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016
Wow cool! XD
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:iconcordeliasmorgenstern:
Is that "different world" ours? And is the miasma made from the hate people who hate My Little Pony?
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Basically, yes.
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:iconcordeliasmorgenstern:
Also, Celestia's mother's name is Tua Sunflare, right? If not, please tell me what is is. And what about her father's? And what about Winter Willow's mom's?
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:iconshadow1333:
shadow1333 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2016
do you want join my group
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:iconpixiepixelz:
PixiePixelz Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So you're the one who made the lovely comics I saw dubbed on youtube.
+1 watcher senpai
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup. That's me :D
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:iconpixiepixelz:
PixiePixelz Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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:iconhyperblossom001:
HyperBlossom001 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
with the music tho it's just, it's just so,so,so,Killua Cry Emoticon Waaaah! Scream emoteCryface Sadness - Inside Out You're crazy and im out of my mind Commission: Bean - Cry Chat Icon - Cute sobbing Callie (sad)Killua Cry Emoticon LaNora Aurora: Sadness v.2 Yuno Gasai Yandere(Grin) Kurapika Mad Eyes Emoticon stupid miasmaKurapika Mad Eyes Emoticon Gon Crying Emoticon  i need a hug SPN HUG 
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:icondeviantaphant:
Deviantaphant Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015
Am I the only one who got the Portal reference? :D
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:iconhatterthethird:
HattertheThird Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Student General Artist
This seems like a somewhat decent fanfic!
Too bad season 4 destroyed it and any hope of it being possibly canon.
GRADE
Style: B+ 
 Well executed, wasn't too fond of 'Tia's parents having the "6 horns" thing going on though.
Story: A-
 A bit on the odd side, but it worked out fine.
Originality: C+
 Rather Commonly Used Concept, Commonly used art style for mlp comics
Overall GPA: B+
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I ended up backing off of the multi-horn thing, though I didn't go back and correct it for these comics.
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:iconhatterthethird:
HattertheThird Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Student General Artist
Oh, okay.
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Hashtag-Underscore Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Since its defeat, the miasma has come back fillynaping other victims; only one of which has returned. even then, the cross eyed victim is now to scared to talk. Another known victims' name is button mash, and the miasma has yet to return him. these victims none of these victims have been powerful enough to use as a vessel to wreak havoc on the world.
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Doctor-Derpy Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Was that a subtle Harry Potter reference? :P
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't remember any HP references in here.
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SouthernNight Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Question, why can't Celestia's parents intervene?

and I can see why the father is Orbash (Hasbro), not quite sure about Tau Sunflare...
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tau Sunflare = Lauren Faust.
They can't intervene because they're restricted by various laws and limitations of the ponyverse. To break those laws, they'd have to break the ponyverse.
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MagicBIaze Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
.. Should'nt the "past" elements of harmony be the G1 ponies or something?
.. Because seriously, not to be rude or anything but these OCs really, really bad.
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BloodLily16 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait… So the miasma was made by haters? Figures.
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:iconnimaru:
Nimaru Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Basically :D
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