So one correction that has come out of this. I think there have been times I said Luau was the oldest when it has to be Rook who's oldest for many reasons. So for those who I led astray, my apologies.
Also note that even now, I'm finding that some of my characters are writing themselves. Especially Luau. I keep trying to make her "Not Pinkie", but she keeps pulling back and acting Pinkie-like. I have NO control over that pony








Seriously, I just approve the idea. I had to do the same for my own first artistic project, just to make sure I won't seriously screw up somewhere, so I understand the need.
No matter, love your story and characters very much. Please keep up the awesome work. x3
As to the necessity of a timeline and visualization, both are life-savers! (They keep some headaches away, too!