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This one took a little time. Lots of other commitments in the way and it was challenging to write. Lots of details, but not enough time to fit them all in. Hopefully the major points of the story are clear.


EDIT: Based on one question below and because I think others will ask: She definitely sees her parents again. Quite frequently in fact. The extra money they got from not having to care for her anymore along with the extra she MADE them accept has helped them both improve their lives dramatically. I believe small kindnesses (like what the Princess did for Rose) can spread far and wide and that's what's happening here.
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*FlutterBOSS May 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*manly sniff* This almost tears me up, her back story and such. Are you a writer? Because this stuff is really good.

Yeah, I guess I'm going back and looking at all your stuff.
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:iconnimaru:
I'm a writer in the sense that every comic is a story (and most have a lot of writing). I'm also writing a fanfic if you didn't notice :D
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:iconflutterboss:
*FlutterBOSS May 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You are? WAT. Since when? How am I so out of it!?
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:iconnimaru:
Here, check it out: [link]
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:icondayle14:
so her power makes her like a mirage
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:iconnimaru:
Not exactly. It's actually sound based, not light based. That's why people can see her from far away despite her technique. If they're close enough, she can "quiet their mind" so they don't notice her. That's also why she can move through busy streets without getting hurt. They know she's there and move out of the way, but don't really think about it or remember it.
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:iconscarlletlover2001:
Rose's colors are like a rose her body color is the leaves and stem while her hair and eyes are the petals
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:iconnimaru:
You got it :)

Also her hair is shaped like rose petals. Just like how Willow's are shaped like Willow fronds.
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~X-I-L2048 Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, she's such a sweetheart. :iconawwwplz: I'd never thought about the fact that things could permanently happen to a unicorn's horn like it happened to her father's. It's kind of a sobering thought. :(
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:iconbigspaceplz:
OKay so,i was going to read this story because i found a strip of it on Ponybooru,so i decided to go to the frist strip,and frankly,you made walls of text so people can understand you Story.
Lucky for you,i will just point the errors on you OC's and ignoring what i said above because im nice like that.

So this one can basically go ninja whitout going ninja.(Cheater,i passed Mask of The Ninja already,and i am almost done with the New Game Plus,and then i find out a single pony can clear the whole thing)
Nothing wrong with Luau
Rook is...A pony who is stronger than normal ponies.And he is a Pegasus.He benefits from being a Earth Pony more,really.
Winter Willow..Went past bullying...like it was nothing.Huh,i don't remember it working like that,really.
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