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[Part 1] 1000 x 5400 pixels

[Part 2] 1000 x 8900 pixels

And now this, part3, coming in at 1000 x 14000 pixels! Good thing the story is almost over!

Some people seem to be stopping here and missing part four. Don't miss the conclusion!

EDIT: [Part 4]

BONUS: For HARDCORE mode, listen to this while you read the story: [link]

As huge as this is, as hard as it was, and as long as it took, there are several things I couldn't fit in. Some will be placed into a separate comic centered on the elements of harmony from 1000 years ago and the rest will take place in the epilogue of this comic (sorry everyone, but there's going to be a part 4).

Fortunately, the last few things I need to do for this comic won't take as long to finish and should wrap up things nicely.

By the way, I know this comic, being that it really starts getting creative with the events of the banishment might rub some people the wrong way. But I gave it my very best shot at making it plausible and fit with the official canon. As of now, everything here is a completely realisitic representation of what might have happened. I JUST BARELY beat the season 2 premiere with this and if it ends up contradicting my theories, well... I WAS FIRST so HA!

I also know there's some artwork out there for the parents, but I wanted to try my own ideas for the design (and mine are way easier to draw anyway :) )

Lastly, I wanted to say that the writing was harder here than in any other comic. There really is a lot shoved in, but I tried to only include the bare minimum that was necessary.

After all, it needed to be heard.

EDIT: I forgot, I'm calling her parents "Orbash" (her father) and "Tau Sunflare" (her mother). Can anyone guess why?

EDIT: by demand: The elements of harmony are (from left to right):
Winter Willow - Kindness, pegusus
Rose Petal - Generosity, Unicorn
Celestia - (all, but in this case, Magic), Alicorn
Rook - MALE, loyalty, pegasus.
Crabapple - MALE, Honesty, earth pony
Luau - Laughter, earth pony

I will be doing more stuff with them in the future :)
EDIT: I already did! Here's an 8 part comic with just them:
[link]

EDIT: This is getting silly. The last scene with Luna near the end is supposed to be an illusion to throw Celestia off. Some people seemed to think it was really her so.. I guess I didn't pull that off as well as I hoped.
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Mood: Wow! ~derpyandluna May 5, 2013
I just realized the other world where the Maisma came from WAS OUR WORLD!. Think about it, in the comic it says "In a different world, where dark feelings and pain are all to common, there are beings who know of Equestria, and some of them look apon it with hate or perversion.". The "Hate" part is supposed to be the people who hate MLP:FIM and/or hate on bronys. Saying that there "gay" or something else. And the "Perversion" part are supposed to be the cloppers.
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*Nimaru May 5, 2013
Yup! You got it.
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~bcmorgan96 Apr 9, 2013  Student Writer
I've been wondering, what do Orbash and Sunflare's cutie marks represent?
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*Nimaru Apr 10, 2013
One is the sun surrounded by a full circle rainbow in the sky, the other is the moon surrounded by a full "moonbow" in the night sky.

I plan to do some character sheets and art for them soonish so that should help explain.
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~bcmorgan96 Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Okay.
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~Kazaboy921 Mar 30, 2013
Falcon PUNCH!
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~CrazyYetClever Mar 29, 2013  New member
Triple Sonic Rainboom....
Rainbow Dash would of been in awe and jealousy
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*Nimaru Mar 31, 2013
I'd love to see Celestia do something like this in the show!
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~greencarrot01 Mar 22, 2013
Hey, can I use the Maisma (I think I got it right) in a comic strip I'm making?
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*Nimaru Mar 22, 2013
certainly :)

Follow your inspiration my friend.
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