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The Real Story, P1 "Miasma" by Nimaru The Real Story, P1 "Miasma" by Nimaru
[Part 2]

[Part 3]

[Part 4]

BONUS: For HARDCORE mode, listen to this while you read the story: [link]

Youtube Music version: [link]

This is part 1 of 3 in my explanation of what REALLY happened. I mean, 1000 years before episode one, they had light and cities. Why wouldn't there have been plenty of ponies out in the dark?

And why banish her for 1000 years? Doesn't that seem extreme? So many people say Celestia is a "troll" for this when in reality there was no other way.

More than anything, I am doing this comic series to defend Celestia who is probably the greatest pony who has ever lived in Equestria and it breaks my heart the way people treat her sometimes.

Now it's time to find out the REAL story behind the legend of the elements of harmony (I just hope I can do it justice with my current level of skill!)

This took about 3 to four weeks to do. The background graphic took 1 and a half weeks alone! I specifically used only Photoshop and not Illustrator for the backstory stuff to make it more rough (to mimic the style used in the show).

EDIT: Fixed a spelling error. Also, thanks for all the words of support! I guess I'm far from the only one who feels this way.

EDIT2: Looks like EQ daily accepted my submission: [link]

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I don't even want to know what happened, from reading the comments, I think it’s that total bull shit that every one likes, and in reality freaking gay, and it's sad that you think this is bringing you up, this:

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or whatever it is now is just zero's and one's it's not even solid this soon will just disappear and no one will remember it as if it never existed, and I'm not going to bet on this because it'll just disappear from time it's self. try picking something that will stay forever not for now also FIND IT ON YOUR OWN
PhoenixWolfii Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  New member
Lol the Miasma say's Cupcakes, Trollestia,To the moon,Molestia, and Scootabuse
BloodLily16 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, so Luna was possessed? That makes sense.
Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Professional Writer
For a few reasons, I'd say that the people running the show should really have adopted this story of yours... it has much more meaning and... faith, than the story they stared with in s4
GraphiteHeart Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
i teared up a bit  T.T
annieo102001 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Are you ever going to redraw this because you have improved a lot since you made this.
Nimaru Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have big plans, but NO TIME at the moment sadly :(
luna-paw1234 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Artist
these are the saddest but greatest comics ever!
Maximilian-McMonkey Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013   General Artist
Dude! That fish bowl has a dragon vomiting water! 8O

...Oh, and the rest of the comic is good too. =P It's kind of weird to see Celestia with out here armor. .-. ON TO PART TWO~ =U
MyLittlePrimo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
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