I can't actually tell if this looks good or not. I did have some suggestions for the original requester, but I probably took it way too far into canon and lost all the original style. Well, I was too far along when I noticed so I just finished it my way which probably isn't too helpful, but cest la vie
Oh, I love the pattern you used for her hair! And the light effect of seeing her ear and horn through it is awesome!
That does look amazing and as always you have some very good tips.
Wow, that looks amazing.