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This isn't going to make sense if you haven't see the actual comic first: [link]

A director's cut version of my "Elements" series. There were a lot of details and story elements I wanted to be sure people understood. Note that the first few are a bit light on detail, but that changes after Winter Willow shows up.
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:iconannieo102001:
Luau has Pinkie Sense, or maybe Luau Sense
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:iconanashadowwolf:
I really love Rose and Willow relationship. They're so cute together. And I love how the others are so protective of Rose, I always love this sort of thing (still remember the kick Rook did when he told BB how there were ponies who were very protective of her).
Scheming, dangerous and evil? Yes, you did it. To be honest, I was even worried about Crabapple but I love how in the next panel, those ponies are even exchanging looks as if they are reconsiderating their own feelings and impressed by him.
As I said, a lot of things are suble, showed rather than said (which I always find a hard thing to do, so I always get impressed: You are an inspiration)
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~Baltohq Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know I've been posting a lot positive comments lately, but I feel like in this one comic in particular I didn't feel as if there was anything special about the annotations. (And I'm hoping you don't read that in a negative tone!) Positive comments are nice but sometimes it's also good to go the other way and pick out things that one doesn't like, and I felt that in this one the annotations were just extra information and nothing too profound was revealed.

Though, that's not to say that the Director's Cut - Elements series was a fail. It was just this one that felt the weakest, but everything else was absolutely marvelous. If I have not said so before, I would like to thank you for taking your time to explain your comic. It's also good to clarify what symbols are being used and emphasizing the foreshadowing - and hey, I thought I had enough of that after reading "How to Read Literature Like a Professor"!
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:iconnimaru:
Don't worry. I felt the same way about a few of them so it's not anything that I would take as being offensive :)

Some of the comics were just more straightforward.
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~Allanpike Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love this. Its so lovely to see everyone so happy after such a nightmare... Willow especially. After all she went though...

After reading this Director's cut... I know for certain that this is one of the, if not THE greatest brony comic ever.
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:iconpaladinbrony:
This has been my favorite comic on DA and with all this explaining has really turned into my most favorite comic to read in years! So many emotions I don't experience myself all the time. In one night of reading them all I had a awesome rollercoaster ride of emotions. You may not think it, but this is the best comic of all fandom. So, much better than all the other silly things that others come up with. This has now become my head cannon.
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:iconnimaru:
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it :D
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:iconpikagirl092:
~PikaGirl092 Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Ok, first off, I LOVE these comics. The set-up, the emotions, and of course the drawing style. I just love the world-building here, it just make Equestria so much bigger. I like the little twist at the end with Crabapple and Willow getting together.

All in all, a brilliant story that I enjoy reading everyday.

5 pot hats out 5. :iconfluttershyyayplz:

Peace.

:)
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:iconnimaru:
Thanks! It was my pleasure.
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~PikaGirl092 Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Also,I would like ask you something: May I use your characters, (Rook,Willow,Crabapple,etc.), in my stories? If not, its OK. :iconfluttershysadplz:
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