I'm about finished with my draft script for the video version of my "Problem with bronies" infographic. I've spent the last three and a half weeks working on it almost every day because I'm doing my very best to make it a video that anyone (other than hater bullies) can benefit from. I want bronies to be able to point friends and family to it to help them understand what bronies are and what they aren't. It's very difficult balancing the need to put useful data in there without it being too wordy or long or confusing while making it convincing without sounding like I'm attacking the "other side".
Any takers? Someone with writing or editing experience would be helpful.